Monday, December 13, 2010

Grading Haiku

Papers and deadlines
Awash in a sea of ink
Red overtakes black


PJD said...

the teacher's scalpel
grimly slices and draws blood
sans anesthesia

Ello - Ellen Oh said...

Peter - that was bloody brilliant!

PJD said...

Funny, I thought that's exactly what I said about yours.

Charles Gramlich said...

That sure looks familiar. Not the haiku but the red marks on the page.

Anonymous said...


Kimbra Kasch said...

Love it

When my sis was in college, back before email, she'd write me letters - I know, "what's that?"

But, I'd correct them in red-ink and mail them back to her. Surprising she ever wrote me at all.But I've gotten lots of laughs over that...

bluesugarpoet said...

And that is why I liked to correct papers in purple ink. :) I love the haiku!

if only you could
write in present tense or at
least stick to one tense

capitalize nouns;
proper - such as people's names
especially your own

jjdebenedictis said...

Canyons of lab-books
Stacks of tedium waiting
Yo, I feel your pain

playbazaar said...

Satta king
i like this very much!!

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