the teacher's scalpelgrimly slices and draws bloodsans anesthesia
Peter - that was bloody brilliant!
Funny, I thought that's exactly what I said about yours.:-)
That sure looks familiar. Not the haiku but the red marks on the page.
Love itWhen my sis was in college, back before email, she'd write me letters - I know, "what's that?"But, I'd correct them in red-ink and mail them back to her. Surprising she ever wrote me at all.But I've gotten lots of laughs over that...
And that is why I liked to correct papers in purple ink. :) I love the haiku!if only you couldwrite in present tense or atleast stick to one tensecapitalize nouns;proper - such as people's namesespecially your own
Canyons of lab-booksStacks of tedium waitingYo, I feel your pain
Satta kingi like this very much!!
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